我校高二月考刚结束。本次考试的二卷写作，我结合新冠话题进行创新命题，主要是真正考查学生的实际水平。
应用文主要关注：如何用80个词把众多内容写出来。我认为80个词主要是练就高度的遣词造句能力，不能有半句废话，要干净利索，不拖泥带水，同时兼顾句子的可读性。
读后续写本次考查：如何联想；如何达到连贯；如何写各种情绪。
我认为死记硬背一//www.58yuanyou.com些词块是有用的，但必须在实战中渗透才真正有效。本次考试主要是唤醒学生这个意识。
第一节：应用文
第一节：应用文（满分15分）
2020年初新肺炎（ novel coronavirus）在全世界爆发，这期间中小学都在网上进行正常的课程学习。请给校长写一封信，内容包含以下要点：
1.你的作息规律和学习感受；
2.表示感恩心情（对父母或老师等等）。
词数：80词左右。
写作指导
这封信相当于汇报和感谢的结合。
第一段：写信的目的。
I am writing to tell you about my online study during the period of coronavirus and express my sincere appreciation.
这段比较简单，但是很多同学还是忘记，写很多无关的话。80 个词根本不允许写无关的套话，必须直抒胸臆。
第二段：你的经历和学习感受
一定要切中要点，一句多余的废话都不能有。总体思路是：
1. 克服困难，每天早起和上网课；2. 中间休息和锻炼；3. 每天很充实。
看起来很简单，关键是如何遣词造句，千万不要干巴巴的。
主题句：The coronavirus confined me to home but couldn’t stop my passion for study.
支撑句：具体解释：Against all odds, I made it a routine to get up early as instructed and attend online classes原由网 on time. In between regular breaks and exercise refreshed myself.
结尾句：写自己感受了，作为总结，用倒装句，强调自己的感情：
To be frank, never have I felt more fulfilled with the help of my teachers!
末段：感恩
还是那句话，80 个词，只能一句有力的话：
All my thanks go to them who are just the beacon of hope in the darkest time.
本句感恩用到比喻，先看：
整段话是：我对你的景仰有如滔滔江水，连绵不绝，又如黄河泛滥，一发而不可收拾，听阁下一言，胜读十年寒窗，看古近风流人物，还数阁下！能在此间见到您，真是小弟一生之荣幸，回家定要烧香祭祖，感谢先辈积下阴德！出自周星驰的《鹿鼎记》
这个就夸张了，但你直接说，感谢你，似乎无法表达深度的。
完整的：
Dear Mr. Zhou,
I am writing to tell you about my online study during the period of coronavirus and express my sincere appreciation.
The coronavirus confined me to home but couldn’t stop my passion for study. Against all odds, I made it a routine to get up early as instructed and attend online classes on time. In between regular breaks and exercise refreshed myself. To be frank, never have ARmLRxwnI felt more fulfilled with the help of my teachers!
All my thanks go to them who are just the beacon of hope in the darkest time.
Yours,
LiMing.
第二节
第二节：请阅读下面一篇新闻报道，然后根据要求写一篇记叙文：
International students in Wuhan, Hubei province, said that they have been receiving good care during the novel coronavirus outbreak thanks to arrangements made by their universities and local authorities.
Hassan Ali, 21, a Pakistani studying logistics engineering at Wuhan Textile University, said that he was upset at the start of the outbreak and his family was also worried about his safety.
"My teachers supported us a lot, helping us each and every moment," said Ali, who began his studies in September. "They raised awareness of the disease, arranged food for us and provided us with masks and all necessary things in our dormitory."
Ali eventually became more at ease about the situation and told his parents, who had contacted him often every day, not to worry.
"I consider Wuhan my second home, and I'm safe and sound," he said. "Now I'm not worried about the outbreak of coronavirus because I trust the Chinese government will prevail over the epidemic."
（from chinadaily.cn)
写作要求：
请以Hassan Ali 的口吻写一个故事，故事由三部分组成：
1. 你的恐慌
2. 周围人的帮忙
3. 你的感恩报答
词数：150 词左右
写作指导
思路：
第一段：如何描述恐慌？
心理描写：心情描写有两种途径：一是直接说恐惧感传遍全身（wash over, run through 等）；二是用细节，诸如头发竖起来；心砰砰跳；屏住呼吸；一动不动，冻住了一样等等。
环境衬托：描述具体的情景，建议用短句。让人害怕的事情应该是急促的。
主题句，短句比喻：Those days were a nightmare!
支撑句：解释病毒的可怕，用比喻：like wildfire （本段支撑句全是外刊中的表达，阅读积累很有必要）：The coronavirus spread like wildfire.
然后写我的心情，并用用环境衬托：Every day, I felt a ripple of fear passing through me at the sight of the scene where patients were rushed to hospitals.They came in, they got intubated, they died.
最后一句是典型的短句，来自于美国医生的绝望的采访所说。因为前面已经有了一个长句，此处只有短句才能凸显恐惧，一个人很恐惧的话，所言都是零零碎碎的。
第二段：周围人的帮忙
一定要先解决衔接，不要直接写别人帮忙。上一段写自己恐慌，那么第二段第一句要过渡一下，继续说自己的无助感，然后第二句一个转折引出别人的帮忙。
过渡句：Especially for me, a Pakistani in China, I felt isolated with no one to turn to at first.
说明：有很多学生一开始就写我的身份，当然是可以的，但也要考虑写记叙文的倒叙法更有吸引力。
主题句：However, soon, all my Chinese friends and teachers called me up and showered me with basic necessities.
说明：考生需要记住，考试中的记叙文不能过分展开，因为一共就150 词，建议两句话概括。这里用到shower 其实也是隐喻，本意是阵雨，但动词就是给人大量的东西。basic necessities 生活必需品。
支撑句：“We are your firm dependence!” my classmate, Liu Ming’s comforting words echoed in my ears frequently. In a wave of relief, my fear faded away.
说明：用对话来对主题句进行举例。结尾句是总结，也是过渡句。别人的帮忙让我的恐惧结束，然后开始下面我的汇报。
Echo in my ears 在我的耳边回响
第三段：报答
这一段要分三层：不仅仅要写自己如何帮助，还要写自己的感受，最后进行升华点睛。
第一句：过渡：Now, Wuhan has become my second home.
无论何时，一定要记住连贯，上面说别人帮助我打消恐惧，然后下面第一句应该是我很感激，怎么表达感激？直接原由网说第二故乡，就对应了材料所说。
第二句：主题句It is my duty to be a volunteer standing side by side with people around me.
第三句：支撑句解释延伸：Every time I met others’ praising smiles, gratitude and happiness rushed in my heart.
结尾句：总结升华：It is true that life is short but love is long.
完整的：
Those days were a nightmare! The coronavirus spread like wildfire. Every day, I felt a ripple of fear passing through me at the sight of the scene where patients were rushed to hospitals. They came in, they got intubated, they died.
Especially for me, a Pakistani in China, I felt isolated with no one to turn to at first. However, soon,ARmLRxwn all my Chinese friends and teachers called me up and showered me with basic necessities. “We are your firm dependence!” my classmate, Liu Ming’s comforting words echoed in my ears frequently. In a wave of relief, my fear faded away.
Now, Wuhan has become my second home. It is my duty to be a volunteer standing side by side with people around me. Every time I met others’ praising smiles, gratitude and happiness rushed in my heart. It is true that life is short but love is long. (153 words)
写好句子的主语可能和你想的不一样
