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高三冲刺后期，写作如何进行最后一锤？我个人的做法就是，把课标主题和教材单元话题结合并分类，然后从近四年的模考卷中挑选适合的题目进行练习。我们要做的是：
1.每个话题下的材料最好多样化，譬如：新闻、说明、记叙、议论。角度越多越好，不能单一。
2.努力总结每个角度的写作方法，形成个人的写作风格，譬如我一般用什么思维拓展，造句可有什么“程咬金三板斧”。
下面我来示范一下，希望对读者有启发，但愿考生能成功应对，这是我最大的心愿。
话题一：性格与品质
这个话题下的思维发散围绕：六“力”： 智力（intelligence）、能力（ability）、动力（mwww.58yuanyou.comotivation）、潜力（potential）、体力（strength）、想象力（imagination）。一个人的性格和品质都无非是以上六个方面的拓展，剩下要解决的就是找到相关的表达。
示范一：热情的重要性（2016扬州期末）
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
The hardworking and never-give-up attitude of Malaysian badminton star Lee Chong Wei has won many people’s hearts.
The 36-year-old player is already a veteran of the badminton world. Despite this, he doesn’t want to call it a day. At the moment, nose cancer is keeping him out of the game.
At a press conference earlier this month, Lee said that he hopes to return to badminton next year and to compete in his fifth Olympic Games held in Tokyo in 2020. “It’s going to be tough to fight for the gold medal, but I will try my very best because it’s always my dream,” he said. Although Lee is one of the world’s greatest players, he has never won a badminton world championship. So if health permits, he will continue to compete because he wants an Olympic gold. Besides his great determination, his other drive is his passion for the sport. “One of the most important things in life to him is badminton,” Lee’s coach Misbun Sodik told the New Straits Times.
After two months of cancer treatment that caused eating and sleeping problems, recently Lee began a little training.
1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2. 综合上述信息，用约120个单词谈一谈“热情对于一个人事业成功的重要性”及其理由。
一、如何写概况：
列要点：
1. The hardworking and never-give-up attitude… has won many people’s hearts.
2. nose cancer
3. compete in his fifth Olympic Games
成句：
The 36-year-old badminton player, Lee Chong Wei, is admired by many people. With his passion for badminton, he is still determined to compete for an Olympic gold medal despite nose cancer.
技能说明：
1.学会转换：win one’s hearts相当于be admired by
2.对主干增添方式和让步状语在励志类文章是常见的，一般有：with/by结构和despite结构。
二、如何写正文：
思维风暴：
1.克服困难--》 strong-minded, efforts, overcome difficulties --》（逆向）otherwise, lose heart
2.成功动力--》 motivation, success --》 (因果) potential, ability
3.创造环境--》 friendly environment --》（因果）efficiency, health
成文：
Definitely, passion is an essential factor to the career we are devoted to. Without passion, we tend toeasily lose heart when faced withchallenges or failures. However, if equipped with enthusiasmabout our pursuit, we will become more strong-minded, sparing no effort toovercome whatever gets in the way. In addition, our passion motivates us totry any means to success with determination, which surely will help toexplore our potentials and increase our abilities. Besides, one’s passion is believed to be contagious. It contributes toa more friendly working environment, thus promoting our efficiencyand improving our health condition.
Since being passionate paves way forour career, we should take our interest seriously when we choose jobs.(119 wds)
闪光词汇：
definitely肯定地
an essential factor一个重要的因素
tend to往往
be faced with面临
be equipped with具备
pursuit追求
strong-minded意志坚强的
spare no effort努力
whatever gets in the way困难
motivate sb to激发某人做某事
explore our potentials开发潜力
increase our abilities提高能力
contagious传染的
contribute to导致
promote our efficiency提高效率
improve our health condition改善健康状况
pave way for为……铺平道路
take … seriously认真对待
举一反三题一：珍惜当下（2018盐城期中）
请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Have you ever thought life would be better anywhere other than where you are right now? Maybe some of your thoughts go something like this: Life will be better once I’m out of debt. I can’t wait until I’m retired because then I can do what I want when I want. If only I lived somewhere warm I could exercise all year round and I would be so fit. If I could just lose 10 pounds I know I would feel better.
Truth is some of your problems may go away once you have met all of your “if only” and “better when’s”, but it won’t make the perfect life that fairy tales are made of. New problems will arise and you’ll likely find yourself wishing for this “perfect” life to be different still. We can only imagine that the grass will be greener on the other side because it’s only when we live it do we actually see it for what it really is.
Whatever ideal you have in mind about an alternate lifestyle, location, financial situation etc ... rest assured that each one will be met with its own unique set of problems.
So what can you do about this? Choose to be content with what you already have.
It’s great to dream big. But those dreams should not cloud the greatness you have in front of you right now. Consider the truth in the grass being the greenest right under your feet.
1. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；
2.用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括：
（1）结合自己的经历，谈谈你对珍惜当下这一话题的理解；
（2）对如何珍惜当下提出你的建议。
一、如何写概况：
列要点：
1. So what can you do about this? Choose to be content with what you already have.
2. Whatever ideal you have in mind about … its own unique set of problems.
成句：
It is common for people to expect a different life, which they believe is perfect. In fact, they should live their current life faithfully and cherish what they have possessed.
技能说明：
议论文的文章要学会把握其中的总结段
二、如何写正文：
思维风暴：
1.所有的例子遵循：困难——成功模式，即：我困难（pressure, escape from reality, frustrations）、我改变（grasp the present）、我成功（motivation）。
2.建议：
充分利用时间：make use of every minute
感恩：grateful
成文：
The same is true ofme. Faced with great pressure from exams, I once dreamed ofescaping from reality. However, repeated frustrations reminded me that my dissatisfaction withcurrent situation is the root cause of unhappiness. Later, my efforts were put in grasping the present and letting gothe past. It became a source of motivationfor me to fulfill my potential.
Therefore, my suggestions areas follows. First, since happiness is not about getting all we want, but about enjoying all we have, we should make every minute countto trade forsomething of value. Additionally, be grateful for our life with all its lessons and blessings. Only when we cherish everything and everyone we encountertoday can we live our life happily.（124wds）
闪光词汇：
The same is true of…某人也是如此。
with great pressure from来自……的压力
dream of梦想
escape from reality逃离现实
my dissatisfaction with我对……的不满
the root cause of……的根本原因
put efforts in…努力做
let go放手
a source of motivation动力的来源
fulfill my potential完成我的目标
as follows如下
make every minute count珍惜分分秒秒
trade for交换；换取
something of value有价值的东西
additionally另外
be grateful for对……感恩
blessings祝福
encounter遇见
举一反三题二：提高国民素质
（2016届常州武进区高三第一学期英语期中）
A netizen wrote on Weibo on Sept 11 regarding a couple’s shameful behavior of carving their names on a 300-year-old vat at the Palace Museum and called for the museum to report the case to the police.
The post caused a heated discussion online. Some criticized the offending behavior, saying, “I don’t want to visit the Palace Museum only to find relics being carved by immoral tourists.” Others said it is common that ancient relics in Palace Museum are being damaged and laws should be introduced.
Apart from random carvings, the Palace Museum has met several cases of shameful behaviors this year. In March open-air relics were trampled(踩踏) and in May unclothed models were photographed riding on ancient relics in the museum’s courtyard.
Similar incidents take place every year. In 2013, a visitor named Liang Qiqi cut “Liang Qiqi has come here” on a vat in the tourist attraction, causing a mass internet hunting. Worse still, in 2013, a Chinese boy carved his name on a stone sculpture at an ancient temple in Egypt and produced widespread reaction worldwide.
1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；
2. 结合上述信息，简要分析这种行为的不良影响；
3. 从社会和个人两方面谈谈如何提升国民素质(不少于两点)。
一、如何写概况：
列要点：
1. A netizen wrote on Weibo on Sept 11 … called for the museum to report the case to the police.
2. The post caused a heated discussion online. Some criticized…
成句：
The passage presents some news about Chinese tourists’ uncivilized actions in scenic spots. They show disrespect for and even do damage to cultural relics. Such offending behaviors have triggered（引发）strong criticism and accusation（谴责）.
技能说明：
1.记住新闻类的标准模式：新闻+评价（包含事件的后果其他人的反馈）。本材料的事件就是：tourists’ uncivilized actions in scenic spots，结果就是：do damage to cultural relics，评价就是：criticism。
2.由于本材料涉及到很多事件，所原由网以不必提具体事件，泛指不文明现象即可。
二、如何写正文：
思维风暴：
谈影响要学会一分为二：
1hEsgxwibW.对建筑物而言：破坏文物（damage relics）
2.对个人和社会而言：破坏国家形象（spoil image）
谈建议，尤其是涉及到公共方面的事件，基本都是：
国家要制定发律和加强监督（laws, supervision）；个人要提高意识和教育水平(promote awareness, educate)。
成文：
Suchuncivilized behaviors can pose a potential threat. For one thing, they will damage the original beauty of historic relics and even distortthe message they carry. For another,with the exposure of these scandals worldwide, China’s national image is without doubtspoiled despite a civilization of thousands of years.
Therefore, it’s an urgent issueto improve the qualities of the whole nation. The government should strengthen supervisionand impose severe punishmentfor such behaviors. Besides, it’s vital to educate individuals about the importance ofpreserving historic sitesand to encourage them to behave themselveswherever they travel. In a word, it calls forjoint effortsfrom the government and ordinary people to maintain and establish a good reputation of civilization.
小提示：
第一句的such非常重要，起着承上启下的作用。一般我们写作都要有衔接意识，用this, that，they等代词都可以。
闪光词汇：
pose a potential threat带来潜在的危险
For one thing,…For another…一方面，……另外一方面，……
distort扭曲
exposure曝光；暴露
without doubt毫无疑问
spoil破坏
an urgent issue紧迫的问题
strengthen supervision加强监督
impose severe punishment施加惩罚
vital重要的
educate individuals about…教育个人关于……
preserve historic sites保护历史古迹
behave themselves行为规矩
calls for需要原由网
joint efforts合力
maintain and establish a good reputation of civilization维持和树立好的文化名声
举一反三题三：吃苦教育
（2015南师附中、淮阴、海门、天一四校联考）
阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。
“He who bears the greatest hardship becomes the greatest man.” This idiom shows Chinese people’s traditional belief in the vital role that hardship plays in a person’s life as they grow up. But today, as our lives have greatly improved, do we still need this so-called “hardship education”?
“We definitely do,” said Wang Weiqiong, mother of a 15-year-old girl in Jiangxi. “Many children take everything for granted, as they’ve never known how difficult it is to make money.”
Wang is not alone. According to a recent survey of 2,017 people done by China Youth Daily, 81.8 percent of the interviewees supported hardship education including experiencing life in poor areas, outdoor training, taking part-time jobs, and doing housework.
Qiao Yu, from Tianjin Foreign Languages School, also supports the idea. “Hardship helps us grow and be prepared for the difficulties of society,” said the 18-year-old, who worked in a cake store this summer.
But while it contributes to students’ development, “hardship education shouldn’t be seen as simply making students suffer,” Sun Yunxiao, deputy director of the China Youth and Children Research Center told China Youth Daily. “It should follow teenagers’ growth.” Sun said that students could also do sports to learn to face difficulties, for doing sports can greatly strengthen their bodies and minds.
1. 以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。
2. 以约120个词发表你对“吃苦教育”的看法，内容包括：
（1）你对“吃苦教育”概念的理解；
（2）支持或反对对青少年进行“吃苦教育”，并给出2~3点理由。
一、如何写概况：
列要点：
1. Chinese people’s traditional belief … do we still need this so-called “hardship education”?
2. But “hardship education shouldn’t be seen as simply making students suffer,”…
成句：
The Chinese have a traditional belief that hardships contribute to one’s growth. A recent survey shows that many parents and students support it, but some experts are opposed to it. (30 words)
技能说明：
材料属于：事实+评价类型。最后一段的but是关键，说明出现了不同的评价，因此写概括的时候不要具体讲细节。
二、如何写正文：
思维风暴：
一定要学会从材料中找要点：
1. …experiencing life in poor areas, outdoor training, taking part-time johEsgxwibWbs, and doing housework.
2. Hardship helps us grow and be prepared for the difficulties of society.
3. It should follow teenagers’ growth.
然后总结如下：
1.如何理解吃苦教育：参加各种活动（activities）--》 促进个人成长
2.观点：支持
3.理由：一分为二看，分精神上和身体上（1）促进品质 （2）有利健康
成文：
As is known, hardship education refers toall kinds of activities including community services, social practice, volunteer work and various sports, which allow teenagers toexperience the difficulties of life and society, thus contributing to their growth.
In my eyes, with the fast development ofourliving standards, hardship education has become a mustfor the contemporary youth. For one thing, hardship education helps teenagers enhance their overall qualitysuch as courage and perseverance, and get better prepared forthe future despite frustrations. For another thing, by participating invarious activities, teenagers can build up their strengthand develop surviving skillsbesides written knowledge.
闪光词汇：
refer to指的是
allow teenagers to使得青少年能……
contribute to their growth促进健康
with the fast development of随着……的快速发展
living standards生活水平
become a must成为必须
enhance their overall quality提高综合素质
perseverance毅力
get better prepared for为……做好准备
despite frustrations无论什么挫折
by participating in通过参与
build up their strength强身健体
develop surviving skills培养生存技能
举一反三题四：新年表决心
（2019徐州期末考试）
请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。
Li Jiang 1 January, Sunny
It’s that time of year again: Time to make New Year’s resolutions. It has become a tradition for me and I have carried on it for years. Every time I tick off the resolutions on the list, I am feeling on cloud nine. I know my life has arrived at a crucial stage and I will have to go all out in the new year. Now I put down my new resolutions here. Firstly, I need to sharpen my writing skills，Secondly, ...
Su Hua 1 January, Sunny
I felt ashamed of myself when I was reviewing my previous resolutions this morning. I make resolutions every New Year’s Day. However, they DON’T WORK! What happens in January stays in January; it rarely makes it to June. “New Year, New You.” I’ll try again and turn over a new leaf. And this time I am crossing my fingers that my new resolutions will be helpful.
1.用约30个词概括上面两段文字的主要内容；
2.用约120个词谈谈你的观点，内容包括：
（1）新年表决心的意义，用1-2个理由或论据支撑你的观点;
（2）实现新年决心的做法（至少两点）。
一、如何写概况：
列要点：
现象：make New Year’s resolutions，popular（not uncommon）
评价：两种（in vain, benefit）
成句：
It is not uncommon for people to make New Year’s resolutions. However, some can reap the benefit after making efforts to realize them while others regret not making their resolutions work.
二、如何写正文：
思维风暴：
意义：重要性（important，play an important role, matter, lay a solid foundation for, pave the way for）
1.提供动力：motivation; driving force, engine--》 comfort zone; embrace new ideas
2.克服困难：hardship--》 not give up halfway --》confidence
做法：
1. small goals --》why? a sense of achievement
2. self-discipline --》 reflect on
成文：
New Year’s resolutions serve asthe source of motivationto break out of comfort zone. They remind you to embrace new ideasso that you can move forward. Besides, they encourage you to keep goingand endure hardshipinstead of giving up halfway. By doing so, your self-confidence will grow, which isa passport to your success.
However, New Year’s resolutions, if not put into practice, will be of no use. First, divide your resolutions into small practical goals, which can bring you a sense of achievementeach time you fulfil them. Second, self-discipline is a must-have quality. You should make it a habit toreflect onyour performance and reward ourselves in time for remarkable progress.
I’m sure that we will make it with persistent efforts.
闪光词汇：
serve as充当
a source of motivation动力的来源
break out of comfort zone突破舒适区
embrace new ideas拥抱新观念
move forward前进
keep going不断前行
endure hardship忍受艰难
give up halfway半途而废
a passport to success成功的通行证
put … into practice实践
be of no use无用
a sense of achievement成就感
a must-have quality必备品质
make it a habit to让……成为习惯
reflect on反思
