上一期内容，于磊老师和大家分享了口语超精细提分手册，今天我们继续上一期的内容，继续来聊提升口语流利度的攻略。
在上一期，老师跟大家讲提升口语流利度的问题，讲解了提升口语流利度的Key point 1,接下来我们从Key point 2 开始：
Key point 2
Hesitation/Self-correction/Repetition
犹豫/自我纠正/重复
【以下的解读中，Candidate A同学的分数将会在口语考试中不超过5-5.5分，Candidate B同学给出了成绩为6+的高分示范；蓝色的文字是战术，要学进脑子里！】
Part 1: Do you like music?
Candidate A：Yes, I like music, because …um…(犹豫)it is very relaxing….and ….it can help me relax（重复）, when I feel tirinwww.58yuanyou.comg…., no, when I feel tired（意识到语法错误的自我纠正）, I always listen music, listen to music, so…,um…, it is a good way to relax（重复,能想到的扩展点太少）
Candidate B：I guess everyone enjoys music, and I am no exception(接考官的问题同时给出个人观点);
Normally speaking, I’d like to listen to a variety of music, including pop, rock, light music and so on（类型）, especially（强调） when I take a ride on subway（时间）, I always listen to music with my earphone（工具） to kill time（原因） and have a relaxing mindset.（战术：用what/when/who/where/why/how的方式尽可能多的去扩展）
Part 2: Why do you want to talk about this restaurant?
Candidate A:
I like the food in this restaurant because they are very delicious(没有规划和组织答案的典型开头), ..um… （想出一句是一句的节奏，出现hesitation）and I also think the environment is very comfortable, many people say their noodle is recommend（逻辑性差，前面在讲环境，但又说回食物）, is recommend-----able（此词拿不准，调整一下出现self-correction）, I like it too; also I want to talk about their price（没有连接词）, it only takes me, no, only costs me（语法不熟练而出现的self-correction） around 50 yuan per meal, which is very nice compared with other restaurants, so that is why I want to talk about this restaurant（通篇词汇和句型过于简单）.
Candidate B:
This restaurant is rwww.58yuanyou.comeally my cup of tea for the following reasons
(战术：总分总结构)
The primary one is that they offer us a range of food selections, which is really authentic and tasty（代替delicious）; apart from noodles, I would still recommend（战术：用自己拿的准的词性造句）the rest of the menu, like side dishes, dumplings as well as the traditional homemade yogurt.
（战术：给名词来论证）
Additionally, the other aspect I’d like to mention is the cozy and comfy environment, which is decorated with an original sensation of Yunnan’s elements(云南元素的风情)， like banana leaf and bamboo(战术：具象描述更加符合西式的思维习www.58yuanyou.com惯); while I stay there, I even could feel on the scene personally（战术：主观感受，身临其境的感觉）.
Last but not least, I consider the price is rather reasonable and affordable(战术：词串而不是单词), which only costs me around 50 yuan per meal; Surprisingly, when I present my student card, unbelievably 20% off discount would be available (战术：推荐别人来，要有具体的点) ; how amazing is that!（战术：用语气表示强调）
Generally, that's why this restaurant is worth recommending. （战术：结论句）
Part 3：Why do someone like the sport of playing soccer so much?
(假设自己完全不喜欢足球，或者被问到了自己一点都没有兴趣或者认识的话题)
Candidate A:um….(从来没想过，我该怎么办？)um…(继续沉默), I don't like soccer, so I don't know why other people like them（出现消极心理暗示）, probably they find this game is really…..um….exciting（寻找形容词，出现停顿）, and….,or they can keep fit when they play soccer, and they think watching soccuVGPwOer game is very fa原由网shionable; um…, something like that. (5-6分之间考生的典型答法，没有连接词和逻辑关系，仅仅是靠本能堆砌,用简单句给出观点)
Candidate B：Well, speaking of soccer, I have to say this is really a challenging question for me, simply because I am not a fan of it at all and so I have no particular sense of their thoughts(战术：同样是不喜欢，把心里的想法用英文表达出来，避免空白和停顿); nevertheless（战术：对连接词的把控）, I guess their sentiments are no more than the following aspects（无非就只有几个方面）, the most typical reason is likely to be their strong interests and passion in this games, surely soccer can bring them surprise and excitement（战术：用惯了形容词，试试名词？）; besides, as a teamwork sport, soccer might provide them with a chance to cooperate with each other or even make friends; one more possible point might be the motivation of working out to keep fit; to name but a few（战术：同样的观点用多样的句型来表达）.
总结
出现此类问题的症结——
• 不知道从哪些角度去分析问题，只会Because正着说这一条；不会使用for example举例，especially 强调，otherwise 反证等不同角度的论证；
• 平时缺乏练习，面对考官的Why问题无所适从；
• 缺乏对问题类型和相应回答结构的掌握，也不能够产生相应的结构和组织；
• 不习惯用英文语言习惯去表达，只有中文的思维方式和表达方式；
于磊Simon的战术板
（fluency and coherence）
• 只用一种方法就解决任何常规话题的思路和观点问题
• 熟练使用六种论证角度去支持自己的观点并体现出逻辑关联
• 大量和多样地替换口语最常用的连接词表达
• 对于不同题型给出自己喜欢用的回答结构和组织
• Practice makes perfect! 通过八词六边形练习完整和强大自己的语言表达体系
大家是不是在今天的案例分析中多多少少找到了自己考试时候的影子？老是停顿，犹豫和没有连接词的表达是最令人痛苦的；这也是Simon希望给大家最大的价值。
Simon课上的核心就是用一种方法----八词六边形就解决所有话题观点+支持的难题，附之大量总结性强的真题练习，最终让大脑形成听到问题——浮现结构——填充观点+支持的高分表达，最终屠鸭成功！
To be continued……
以上就是于磊老师关于口语提升流利度Key point 2 的分享。
下一期我们会继续讲解第三个key point之连接词，非常重要！！！
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