距离2019年高考仅137天
为了更多同学在高考英语写作中得到满分，小编特精选了以下范文，希望大家务必研读背诵！（尤其注意：文中划线部分为该体裁的套话； 黑体部分为写作中的经典表达。）
一.参与报社等讨论稿（带手机利弊）
Dear Editor:
[引出话题] I’m a senior three student.I’m writing to tell you my opinion onwhethermiddle school students can go to school with mobile phones. [赞成]I think they can do that.Because students can keep in touch with their friends and family wherever they are. Besides, the mobile phone is a way to have fun.
[反对] However, every coin has 2 sides. There are some problems with using mobile phones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the classroom. What's more, some students can spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.
[个人观点] In conclusion, I suggest students not use phones in the classroom. Also, as it is expensive, the owner should take good care of it.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
二.看对照表格写调查报告（孩子出国利弊）
[调查内容] A surveywww.58yuanyou.com is taken onpublic opinions of the fact thatmany parents spend a large amount of money sending their children to study abroad, some of whom are middle school students.
[调查结果]From it we can see that38 percent of those surveyed thinkit is worth the money letting children study abroad to get a better education so that they can get p原由网ay in return in the future. However, not all are for it / some are against it.62% of themhold the view thatit is difficult for young people to live and study in a foreign country. It’s easy for them to fall / get into some bad habits and the cost of education in another country is ten times as much as that at home.
[解决措施]The survey shows thatthe government should set up different kinds of schools to meet the demands of different children. （句型do something /take measures / steps about sth.to do sth）
三.读柱状图表写调查报告[注意句式变换]
Middle school students have some ideas about their future jobs.
The most striking contrast is in teaching: 30percent of the girls would like tobecome teachers while only 5percent of the boys want to do the job. 20 percent of the boys want todo business and another 20 percent want to become lawyers, while girlsmake up15percent in these two fields. What boys like to do most is to become managers and the second largest group would like to be scientists. Besides teaching, the second choice for girls isto be scientists and managers. The number is not small. Girls also expect toshow their abilities in these two fields.
四.写信（过去/现在对比）
Dear editor,
I’m a middle school student.I once had a very happy family, but everything has changedbecause of my father.
He used tobe a very good doctor and was often praised by his patients. He took good care of the family and shared the housework with my mother everyday.
However, he is nowquite a different person. He plays mahjong all night and often quarrels with my mother. I just can’t concentrate on my studies and my grades are coming down. I’m very much worried and I’m afraid it will destroy my family as well as my father.
Could you tell me what to do? I’m looking forward to your reply. Thank you very much.
Yours
Li Hua
五.图画+个人想法
One day during the summer holidays, I met my classmate Li Ming, whose nickname is Tao taopi. We chatted for a while as we walked. I asked him where he would go during the holidays. He replied that he had to stay at home studying. Then I’d like to know why he didn’t go out for a tour. Much to my surprise, he told me that it was just because he failed to be accepted by key universities.
In my opinion/Personally/ I think, traveling during the holidays not only increase a student’s knowledge of his or her motherland but also makes life meaningful. What’s more, at the present time, we students are suffering a lot both at home and school. Why not go out to get relaxed.
六.幽默画
We want our schoolbags lighter
[图画内容]The picture shows usa schoolboy and a big woman. The boy is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy bag. The woman is taking some exercise. The boy is saying to the woman jokingly: “Mum, if you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will easily lose weight….”
[社会实际]It’s quite common thatChinese students are overburdened with the lessons and homework. What we do every day is to listen to the teachers’ lectures, take notes and do our homework which seems endless.
[个人想法]We do hopeour teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, e原由网xercises and less homework. Only in this way can we have time to do sports every day. Then we will be mentally and physically healthy.
七.补全图画
Yesterday afternoon I went to the park. It so happened that I saw a touching event.
At that time there were some people boating on the lake. A girl and her parents were taking photos. All of a sudden, the little girl fell into the lake as a result of carelessness. Obviously she couldn’t swim and was struggling in the water. Her parents cried for help. Hearing the cry, a yo//www.58yuanyou.comung man immediately rushed to the bank and jumped into the water without taking off his clothes. He swam to the drowning girl and managed to push her to the bank. At last the girl was saved. The girl’s parents were very grateful to the young man. Many people were greatly moved by the young man’s deeds.
What a kind and brave young man!
八.广播稿（看图海啸）
Boys and girls,
May I have your attention, please?At the end of 2004, a strong earthquake hitthe west part of Indonesia, which brought on a terrible tsunami to some areas of western Asia. This disaster has caused millions of deaths and destroyed many beautiful cities. How terrible things are! Besides, millions more who have become homeless are in great need of help now.
At present many countries all over the world including China have sent rescue teams there and thousands of people in every corner of the world are donating money to show their concern for them.
It is true that many natural disasters can’t be avoided sometimes. But at least we can do something to help the people in the tsunami-hit areas. So let’s offer our pocket money to them! Thank you.
九.通知
NOTICE
Tohelp students learn more about computers, we have invited Professor Wang from the Computer Department of Qinghua University to give us a lecture on Saturday, December 22nd. Professor will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the Internet.
The lecture begins at 2;00pm in Room 204 of the Library Building. Any computer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture. Please bring your questions in computer learning. Professor Wang will leave you time for questions.
Don’t forget to be on time.
the Students’ Union
Dec. 19th, 2004
十.欢迎词
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to our school! Now let me introduce something aboutthe changes that have taken place in our class.
We used to listen and take notes in class, but had no time to think for ourselves. Because we were not interested in the lessons, we often felt sleepy while listening. After school we had to finish much homework, unable to have some sports.
However, things are different now.With the help of computers, the lessons are so lively and interesting that the students are active to answer the que//www.58yuanyou.comstions instead of falling asleep. As a result, we have made greater progress than before, though we spend less time doing our homework. And we can enjoy ourselves after class.
The good teaching method is popular with all of us. We will try our best to study even harder.
That’s all. Thank you!
高考英语作文满分标准与写作策略
一、满分要求
1.语篇信息齐全;
2.丰富的句式表达;
3.注意句与句之间的连贯性;
4.语句流畅自然，层次清楚;
5.应用较高级词汇;
6.书面整洁。
二、写作策略
1.“五审”定调子
写作时，要养成在审题上形成一种定向思维的习惯，做到“五审”：
一审体裁。根据作文材料要求确定文章体裁。然后建立相应体裁的行文模式。我们常用的体裁有书信、日记、通知、发言稿、说明文、记叙文、议论文等。
二审人称。文章中人称选择恰当对表达文章的基本思想、描述事物及情节都很有帮助。应特别注意英文中人称的阴阳是很容易被忽视的。
三审时态。高考评分中，谓语动词形式是被看重的，一篇文章如果多处出现谓语动词错误，就要降等给分。所以我们在审题时要给文章的时态定个位，即过去时、现在时或将来时。再以这个定为时态基础，按需要使用相应时态。
四审要点。高考评卷中，作文的大块得分集中在文章的要点和要点发挥上，一般来说，英语高考作文有4-6个要点，考生在读题时要边读边列出要点并写出要点中的关键词，这样既能保证要点齐全又能节省时间。
五审层次。层次分明，脉络清晰，让读者一目了然。记叙文大多数以人物活动、时间顺序或事情发展过程为线索;说明文大多以时间、空间为线索;议论文的写作一般按先总后分或先分后总的顺序。
2.“韵色”得高分
培养学生在保证文体正确、要点齐全、层次分明的基础上，恰当运用一些漂亮的句式、关联词、插入语和谚语等，能使文章更上档次。
三、注意事项
1.提炼要点
(1)总结归纳要点：不是所有内容都要写出来，而是抓住其中的关键要点、衔接要点!
(2)理顺要点：将提炼的要点按逻辑关系(如时间关系、因果关系、转折关系等)重新安排，这样整篇文章看起来就整体有序，流畅自然，更加容易打动评分老师，从而使作文分数提升一档。
2.遣词造句
(1)遣词
①不出现语言错误;②注意词语和短语搭配使用;③适度使用加分词汇;④避免词语重复，以加分词句：高级词、同义词、短语等替代。
(2)造句
①表达意思要清楚无误：具体化，细节化;②多种表达方式表达相同含义;③避免句式单调(简单句、并列句、复合句等适度调整);④可以用形象思维来表达(比如说你朗读得“很好听”，用“抑扬顿挫”来表达就是形象思维)。
3.谋篇布局
(1)构思文章提纲：根据题目的要点，安排好段落和主次关系。要形成良好的分段意识，写作分段是必须要进行的(2至4段为佳)，这样显得文章不会拥挤并且层次分明。在行文意识上，要注意突出要点。
(2)分段注意详略搭配、注意连贯;
(3)行文时多用关联词、引导词，把文章句子通过各种关系整合起来，达到起承转合、运用自如的目的，从而获取高分;
(4)具体的连接关系有：并列关系、递进关系、因果关系、转折关系、让步关系、列举关系、条件关系、举例关系、时间关系等。
只看这字，都不好意思扣分！
编辑：小欢
