题目一
假设你叫李华。你的英国朋友Andrew下个月要来你校学习两个月。他来信请你对他上学期间的交通方式提出建议。现在，请你用英语回一封信，按以下各点答复。
1. 建议骑自行车上学；
2. 自行车是学生常用交通工具；
3. 骑自行车的一些好处；
4. 骑自行车需注意的问题。
注意：1.词数100左右，信的开头和结束语已为你写好(不计入总词数)；
2. 可根据内容要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯。
Dear Andrew,
Very happy www.58yuanyou.comto hear from you and you’re welcome to study in our school for the next two months.
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Hopefully, what I’ve mentioned above could be helpful and wish you a fun time in our school.
Yours sincerely
Li Hua
例文
Dear Andrew，
Very happy to learn from you and you’re welcome to study in our school for the next two months.As for the question about the transportation to and from school, I’d like to recommend your riding a bicycle.Here are some reasons.
Firstly, riding a bike to and from school is very co//www.58yuanyou.commmon among the students, for buying or repairing a bicycle doesn’t cost a lot. Next, parking a bicycle is easy and convenient in our school, no matter how busy the traffic could be. Actually, bicycleriding is also a practical way to do exercise and proteFIklIyct the environment. What you should do carefully is just to keep an appropriate speed while riding and lock it after you’re off it.In this way, you’ll feel it simple and relaxing to ride a bicycle while you’re here.
Hopefully, what I’ve mentioned above could be helpful and wish you a fun time in our school.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【解析】
写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲，确定文章的中心思想，然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。注意文章文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。
【亮点说明】
文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如protect the environment ;keep an appropriate speed, wish you a fun time还运用了no matter who及while引导的状语从句及what引导的主语从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如：Firstly；Actually, In this way等等。
题目二
假设你是新华中学的学生张凯，班里从外地转来一名学生李华，他一时无法融入新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写一封建议信。
1.帮他分析原因；
2.给他提出建议；
3.陈述你帮助他的具体打算。
注意：词数100左右。
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例文
Dear Li Hua，
I know you are now having trouble communicating with others.That's because you are new here and people don't know about you.But I think you can fit in with the new class if you follow the following suggestions.
Firstly, you should take an active part in class discussions.At the same time, learn to listen to other people's views.Secondly, it is necessary to learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes.Only in this way can you get to know more different people.Last but not least, I'm always here ready to help you.We can take part in some activities together where I can introduce you to others.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.
【解析】
【分析】
这是一篇说明文，要求写一封信。
【详解】
第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一、时态为一般现在时。第二、人称为第二人称。
第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，1.帮他分析原因；2.给他提出建议。第二段，陈述你帮助他的具体打算。第三段，表达祝愿。其中第二段为主要段落。
第三步：确定关键词汇和短语。communicate with, fit in with, take an active part in, view, likes and dislikes, activities, introduce.
第四步：确定较为高级的句子。I know you are now having trouble communicating with others. That's because you are new . It is necessary to learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Only in this way can you get to kwww.58yuanyou.comnow more different people. We can take part in some activities together where I can introduce you to others .
第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接。But,Firstly,At the same time,Secondly,Last but not least.
第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。
【亮点说明】
文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式如:I know you are now having trouble communicating with others. That's because you are new . It is necessary to learn about your classmates' likes and dislikes. Only in this way can you get to know more different people. We can take part in some activities together where I can introduce you to o原由网thers 高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次。整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。
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